User:Ninastuder/Cafe Metropole/Jacksonwacker Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Nina Studer


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Ninastuder/Cafe_Metropole?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * The plot summary is easy to follow. The author has added many details from the film that carry you through the summary without it becoming hard to follow or confusing. There are plenty of links embedded within the text that leads to pages for the actors in the film, locations referenced in the plot, and any other pieces of information that the reader might need a better understanding of while reading this summary, for example the link to baccarat.
 * There are no grammar mistakes within the plot summary or reception section that I noticed. I think overall the plot summary was well constructed, and that the quotes used from historical newspapers in the reception section give a good sense to modern readers about how the film was seen when it was released.


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)