User:Ninty900/Transgender hormone therapy/Yrodriguez7 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Ninty900


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Ninty900/Transgender hormone therapy
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Transgender hormone therapy

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

You have a good start and included interesting information. The details included so far appear to be objective, which is good. My only suggestion, besides expanding on both sections, is to double-check your citations. The first sentence under "WPATH/HBIGDA" that talks about the Harry Benjamin Gender International Gender Dysphoria Association’s Standards of Care would not be considered a common fact, so be sure to cite this sentence as well.