User:Niquekaaa/Neurological disorder/Lilaclouise Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Niquekaaa


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Niquekaaa/Neurological disorder


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Neurological disorder

Lead Section Edits
The introductory sentence you added is good but the sentence structure is off, so it seems a bit wordy and confusing. I suggest removing the word "however" and rewriting the sentence as two separate ones. Your introductory sentence is not concisely and clearly stated however it does describe the article's topic perfectly.

Content Section Edits
The content added is relevant to the topic along with up-to-date information. The structure does need to be reviewed a bit more.

Tone and Balance Edits
The content added is neutral. The edits show no claims that appear heavily biased toward a particular position. The edits made all seem to be informational based. There are no view points that are overrepresented or underrepresented. The content added does not persuade the reader in favor of one position or away from one.

Sources and References
The new content seems backed up by a reliable secondary source, however the sources seem all over the place. They are not input correct within wikipedia. The sources do reflect accurately what the cited sources say. The sources are thorough and current. The links work.

Organization
The sentence structure needs some work.

Images and Media
no images were added.

For New Articles Only
it is not a new article.

Overall Impressions
I think the content you added as improved the overall quality of the article. It is really good just needs a bit more structure.