User:Niquekaaa/Neurological disorder/Sintegral Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Niquekaaa


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Niquekaaa/Neurological_disorder?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Neurological disorder

Evaluate the drafted changes
I don't see many edits so far, which is fine, but of the two that I do see, the first one:

"Neurological disorders occur from damages to the nervous system however, the location of the damage interferes with how communication, vision, hearing, movement and cognition are impacted."

needs a citation.

The second one:

"Other neurological disorders can be caused by trauma, tumors, and degeneration."

is a very general statement and may be extraneous information.