User:Niuniuhuahua



I am a student from University of Sydney

Apple cider vinegar

This page was first created on 10th of July 2009. The oldest page was written in an intuitive way that presented the content in paragraphs. If I were the first creator of this page, I would apply tables to classify the content, which can give readers a clear vision about this subject. At the same time, I would use different subtitles to identify different aspects I would like to emphasize about this subject. If I were the second reader, I will add some clear pictures/photos at the beginning of the page to show readers what is apple cider vinegar. Secondly, I will change the format of the page by using lines, different fonts to improve the professionalization of the page. The last but not least, I will replace the content that showed by numbers or short phrases into tables to increase the precision.

Activity3(citation)

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