User:Njkleb/Methanococcus maripaludis/Princesseslikescience Peer Review

"This was tested by noting that strains of the cell that weren't able to grow these attachments struggled stay in one place when placed into preferable temperatures and pH levels. "

- expand on what exactly was tested. fix grammar on this sentence as well

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