User:Njputman/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
African-American women in the civil rights movement

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
Black women's involvement in the civil rights movement is of great historical significance. Therefore it is imperative that this history is present and accessible as it provides context to the current state of race and gender relations in the United States.

Evaluate the article
The article's organization is successful and provides a hierarchy of information that helps guide readers through the content. This is important as there is a lot of information here that should be easily comprehendible despite the heaviness of the content. That said, I find that the sentence structures overall could be edited to contain less fluff and therefore better articulated. Other than that I feel like there are more sections that can be added to this article including more names added to the list of women leading the movement.