User:Nkechimoro/Stereotypes of African Americans/Sydnit2 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

NkechiMoro


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Nkechimoro/Stereotypes of African Americans


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Stereotypes of African Americans

Evaluate the drafted changes
I liked how you fixed the sentences in the Golliwog section of the article. The original wording was a bit confusing and your edit makes it a lot easier to understand. I also liked the additions tot he gator bait section. The Mammy section doesn't talk about how the character acted toward her own family. This could be a good addition to the article. I believe there could be an addition to the Jezebel section by adding what it has become in the 21st century. There's grammar mistake in the tragic mulatta section ("being marriage"). I like the way out sandbox is structured, it makes it easy to look at your work.