User:Nkistephenie/Choose an Article

Article Selection
Please list articles that you're considering for your Wikipedia assignment below. Begin to critique these articles and find relevant sources.

Option 1

 * Article title
 * Gamma (eclipse)


 * Article Evaluation
 * Lead is a little hard to read, especially the definition of Gamma, could use some rewriting. It's also very short, doesn't really explain the importance of a Gamma and how it effects eclipses. It doesn't summarize or explain what the sections will talk about.
 * Most of the writing in the sections needed to be reworded for clearer understanding, especially for those first learning about Gamma. Its very lacking in information in general about Gamma and it's relevancy.


 * Sources
 * https://eclipse.gsfc.nasa.gov/SEsaros/SEsaros.html
 * UK Solar Eclipses from Year 1

Option 2

 * Article title
 * Andromeda (mythology)


 * Article Evaluation
 * The lead does a good job of introducing who Andromeda is and how relevant she in society and mythology. The sections then go on to explain Andromeda myth, physical appearance and appearance in cultural references and art. I think more can be added to Andromeda's story, since it mostly just consists of her being saved. The "See Also" should include gods that are apart of her myth. More information should include her constellation and galaxy.


 * Sources
 * https://www.britannica.com/topic/Andromeda-Greek-mythology
 * The Library of Greek Mythology by Apoolodorus
 * Star Tales by Ian Ridpath

Option 3

 * Article title
 * Japanese mythology


 * Article Evaluation
 * The Lead does a good job in explaining what Japanese mythology is and were the main sources of it are listed. Most of the sections talks about the sources of the myths and how some of them originated.


 * Sources
 * https://www.britannica.com/topic/Japanese-mythology
 * Handbook of Japanese Mythology by Micheal Ashkenazi

Option 4

 * Article title
 * Summoner Wars


 * Article Evaluation
 * For one, the title of the Article isn't correct and doesn't correspond with the game's name. The Lead doesn't explain what the game is, and the only section is about the game's reception. More needs to be done like how the game was created, developed, and how it's changed over time.


 * Sources
 * https://www.facebook.com/SummonersWarCom2us/
 * https://www.withhive.com/game/desc/313
 * https://sw.com2us.com/en/swc

Option 5

 * Article title
 * Disney Television Animation


 * Article Evaluation
 * Sources
 * Sources