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I will critiquing Karyolysis

The article is a bit scarce, it would greatly benefit from the addition of more information. The reference is an appropriate and reliable as it is a peer-reviewed research article. The page stuck to the bare minimum of explaining karyolysis, information such as it's discovery and part in other mechanism would help it a lot. The page is very objective and shows no bias. The visual aids are huge positive but they can also be improved to show more detail. If I wanted to know what karyolysis is this article would show me but would leave me wanting more.

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Disintegration of the cytoplasm, pyknosis of the nuclei, and karyolysis of the nuclei of scattered transitional cells may be seen in urine from healthy individuals as well as in urine containing malignant cells. Cells with an attached tag of partially preserved cytoplasm were initially described by Papanicolaou and are sometimes called comet or decoy cells. They may have some of the characteristics of malignancy, and it is therefore important that they be recognized for what they are.