User:NoVAFanatic/sandbox

Arrest and Trial
Overall, the information that has been entered in here has been a major expansion of the article that it started out as, and contains some very valuable informationthat the article needed in order to provide information well. Comparing your article to a similarly constructed article for another businesswoman (Heather Bresch),I believe that you should do a bit more research on her early life and then pair that along with education at the top and leave "personal life" for experiences nowin case you find anything more throughout your research. Comparing the amount of information on careers here, it would be nice if there was a bit more informationthan there is now, possibly segmented by subheadings, but I am unsure about the amount of information that is available for Pamela Lopker. Also, don't forget to properly cite your sources!