User:No More Mr Nice Guy/V


 * "Some of them" X becomes "mainly" X
 * "Nearly two dozen" children becomes "dozens" of children
 * "rubber-coated" bullet becomes "steel-coated"
 * source describes a hit and run with no further implications becomes part of Israeli-Palestinian conflict.
 * Source says someone said "that a photo of an elderly Palestinian woman searching through rubble reminded him of his grandmother who died in Auschwitz". First attempt: (changes to plural and generalizes) "have drawn an analogy between the Jews in the Holocaust, and suffering at the hands of the IDF among Palestinians". Second attempt: (now it happened in Auschwitz) "reacted to the image of a Palestinian woman forsaging in the rubble by thinking of his mother in Auschwitz."
 * Source says an attack "provoked Israel" into something, article says  "used as a pretext"
 * "initially was characterized as..." becomes "often thought to be"