User:Noah0314/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
Malcolm Glazer

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
I chose it because he is the owner of two major sports teams, one being Tampa Bay Buccaneers in the NFL and more notably Manchester United FC, a soccer team in England. He has been under fire from the fans of Manchester United lately due to the lack of investment in the club, stadium and players.

Evaluate the article
The lead is strong and short, it gets off the introductions of Malcom Glazer. It is brief and to the point, I believe it was a good lead

As for the content, it looks up to date and relevant. You see key points in Malcom Glazer's life and it is easy to read in chronological order.

The sources and references are fairly recent as of 2014, and it coincides with when he passed away. They seem to be relevant.

The article is clear and concise, not a difficult read and easy for readers/viewers to follow along.

One negative with this article is the lack of images, only one image is in the article and it is a picture of Malcom Glazer himself. I think they should add some of his businesses too.

I truly believe this article is good because it is easy to read and short enough to keep people attention span, some articles do the opposite of that. Some negatives may be the lack of pictures and visualization in the article itself and maybe more photos should be added to increase viewership.