User:Noah Wetz/Procurement/JEOushak Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Noah Wetz


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Noah%20Wetz/Procurement?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Government procurement

Evaluate the drafted changes
Content: The content adds needed context to the article, I think it could benefit from a summary of some of the case-specific international context/examples but I think the global context here around total spending helps.

Tone and Balance: Tone is balanced and neutral.

Sources and References: Sources look good though the OECD link looks formatted wrong

Organization: Organization is good, I'm wondering if this fits into the problems/scope sub-headers already in the article or if you are replacing them. I also wonder if there's a better way to organize country examples in article.

overall Impressions: This adds helpful context on public procurement and very general information appropriate for wikipedia. More fleshing out on corruption would also be good for the article.