User:Noahbei/Missing and murdered Indigenous women/Strawberryliz Peer Review

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 * User:Noahbei/Missing and murdered Indigenous women
 * Link to the current article
 * Missing and Murdered Indigenous Women

Evaluate the drafted changes
Content added about the statistical facts according from the National Institute of Justice, added more factual evidence to the wiki article. I do maybe suggest combing the first few sentences with the information you added as it seems a little bit repetitive. The content is neutral. Make sure to add citation after sentence is composed.

The first sentence after the quote is a good intro sentence as it shows the reader the two different acts that contributed to this issue going on. It is smoothly connected to the rest of the paragraph remaining in a neutral tone.

The sentence beginning with "The act was stalled in the..." helped improved the clarity of the sentence a little more compared to how it was before. Make sure to cite at the end of the following sentence.

The source number 2 "Violence Against American Indian and Alaska Native Women and Men" seems to be published in 2016, is the information up to date? I would check just in case.

Overall all the information added onto the wiki is neutral in my opinion and makes the information flow a little smoother, I would just make sure to not forgot to add citations where needed.