User:Noahratliff/Animal tooth development/Christopher.horacek Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Noah Ratliff


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Noahratliff/Animal tooth development


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Animal tooth development

General Edits
- Some information could be presented more concisely, but this will likely occur as you integrate your new information with the existing information within the article. Keep this in mind as you integrate the new info.

- Providing examples of model organisms used to study animal tooth development (if the available sources permit) would be a nice addition

- Double check sentence structure

Information Organization
Possible inclusion of heading for the following information:

- Selection of study organisms (first several sentences)

- Reptiles

- Subheading for Humans/Primates under mammals.

Wikipedia Formating
- Be sure to cite your references using the "Cite" function in the editing dashboard to integrate with the pre-existing references and offer clickable in-text citations.

- Link relevant topics to other wiki articles (ex. SHH gene, human tooth development, ect.)

Finishing Touches
- Including several related images regarding tooth development in the example groups (ex. shark) would elevate the article overall.

Overall
- Your sandbox draft presents a fair amount of new information that will add to the overall value of the chosen article. I think the strongest addition is the information regarding reptiles as this topic is missing from the article and the source is strong. Creating new subheadings, specifically regarding selection of study organisms, may require more information. Also, reviewing the Human Tooth development page as you add relevant information to this article might prove helpful. As you integrate, be sure to present your information in a concise manner in the appropriate position on the page.