User:Noahsinc/Shoulder pad (sport)/Salc456 Peer Review

General info
noahsinc
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Noahsinc/Shoulder_pad_%28sport%29?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Noahsinc/Shoulder_pad_%28sport%29?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template

Evaluate the drafted changes
Gives 2 references, explains the fitting guidelines of fitting shoulder pads., aswell as the safety of shoulder pads. I feel that you should mention what sports( not just hockey) use shoulder pads