User:Noellemary96/Self Esteem (musician)/GraceHarnett21 Peer Review

Peer review
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General info

 * I am reviewing a draft for Noellemary96 that is being added to the article "Self Esteem (Musician)"
 * Self Esteem (musician)
 * User:Noellemary96/Self Esteem (musician)

Lead

 * The lead does reflect the content of the article sufficiently.

Content

 * The content in the article is relevant and up to date. The wiki user's edits do improve the article and adds more context.

Tone and Balance

 * The content is neutral and straightforward. The article is well balanced.

Sources and References
Guiding questions:

There are a good amount of sources used that make the information appear true and relevant.

Organization
The article is organized neatly but there could be more information added to her "early career" section. Otherwise, the information in the article is organized satisfactorily.

Images and Media
There are no images.

Overall impressions
Guiding questions:


 * I think that the content of the article has been improved. The editor added context about her sexuality as well as information for the inspiration the name "Self Esteem". Great job!