User:Noienoah/1977 NBA All-Star Game/Vjspez Peer Review

Hello! My name is Vinny Speziale and I am offering my advice for the peer review

Need to add more information for bibliography.

A more in-depth lead that offers deeper insight into the All-Star game might help make this article stronger. What was some additional background behind the first half of the 1977 season? What were some of the storylines that took place leading up to the All-Star game, and after? Could use some deeper insight all around to strengthen it. Good information though! And a very fun topic to write about.

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