User:NolanOriger/Cell Engineering/Neejpadman Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Nolan Origer


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:NolanOriger/Cell_Engineering?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * N/A

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

Lead:

 * Concise description of cell engineering
 * Includes brief intro and overview of the methodology of cell engineering

Content:

 * Content is relevant and up to date
 * Maybe rather than Overview you change the section title to Applications to make it slightly more direct.
 * Improving production of natural cellular products: describes the application in increase yield and includes helpful examples
 * Altering cell requirements: Clear description use for decreasing cellular material cost
 * Augmenting cells to produce nw products: describes using recombinant DNA to engineer cells to produce alternate products.

Tone/Balance:

 * Neutral tone
 * no bias
 * No persuasion

Sources/References:[edit]

 * Relevant sources
 * up to date/recent sources
 * All new statements of facts backed by cited sources
 * Working links to sources.

Organization:[edit]

 * Well-organized
 * subsections allow for breakdown of topic and clarity
 * Move Etymology section before Overview for better flow.
 * No grammer, spelling, or punctuation errors.

New article:[edit]

 * Manu reliable sources (13 sources).
 * Sources are from varied authors and cover a broad range of topics related to cell engineering.

Overall Impressions:[edit]

 * Article is well fleshed out
 * The picture adds an example and breaks up the visual structure of the article making it more appealing and inviting.
 * Demonstrates a well researched and supported understanding of the variety of uses cell engineering has.
 * Provide clear examples to illustrate uses in each subsection.