User:Nomakm/Dr. Catalina Martinez/Jasminenwee Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Nomakm


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Nomakm/Catalina Martinez
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
I think you did a really good job with your wiki page! I like the neutral voice you used when describing her background and career. You did a really great job at explaining her education and career timeline in a clear and concise way. I also liked how you included a volunteer work section to highlight some other work she does outside of her research career.

One thing I think you can add to your page is using more hyperlinks to external website such as Knauss fellowship". Adding the website describing the fellowship may be helpful for readers who may be interested in learning more about it. This is just a suggestion but I noticed how you included a section on how she advocates for JEDI champions at the end of your NOAA section. Perhaps adding a subsection within NOAA would better highlight this work she has done and the awards she has gotten. Overall good work!