User:NominallyNaomi/Cross-gender acting/Robynbest Peer Review

General info
NominallyNaomi
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:NominallyNaomi/Cross-gender_acting?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Cross-gender acting

Evaluate the drafted changes

 * I think the changes you plan to make are really good and will help the article out
 * Your sources look really good!
 * I think as well, the first section after the overview could maybe use more attribution? I feel like a lot of stuff is said without saying where it came from