User:Noodlesoup 110033/Bucky Barnes (Marvel Cinematic Universe)/CarterWiser Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

https://dashboard.wikiedu.org/users/Noodlesoup%20110033


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Noodlesoup%20110033/Bucky_Barnes_%28Marvel_Cinematic_Universe%29?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Bucky Barnes

Evaluate the drafted changes
Playing in your 3rd revision has brackets in the word that should be removed. I believe the revisions all sound much better than the original writing in the article. In the third edit you made it sound a lot clearer and were much better at getting to the point. The first source doesn't have the most information to use but could be used for small bits of info. The second source has lots of info that would be useful for your article edit.