User:Noorchaudhryy/Ehab Abouheif/Fishratthings Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Noorchaudhryy


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * *nothing in sandbox yet; doing suggestions based on article
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Ehab Abouheif
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Ehab Abouheif

Evaluate the drafted changes
The main things I would add would be further details about his research and upbringing/personal background (if available), but probably more for the "Research" section because it oversimplifies his work (which should be highlighted more). There is also just one citation given for this section. I looked at this, and it seems that more information is provided here than that is present in the source, so maybe you could find more sources summarizing his research contributions/focuses?

Also, I'm not sure if the "Selected publications" is completely necessary to include. Maybe you could look into some of these and make them citations for the additions to the "Research" section?