User:NopeDotJPG/1960s Berkeley protests/Sh3nl0ng16 Peer Review

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 * User:NopeDotJPG/1960s Berkeley protests/Bibliography - Wikipedia


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"This is where you will compile the bibliography for your Wikipedia assignment. Add the name and/or notes about what each source covers, then use the "Cite" button to generate the citation for that source.


 * Example: Luke, Learie. 2007. Identity and secession in the Caribbean: Tobago versus Trinidad, 1889–1980.
 * This is a book published by a university press, so it should be a reliable source. It also covers the topic in some depth, so it's helpful in establishing notability.
 * Example: Galeano, Gloria; Bernal, Rodrigo (2013-11-08). "Sabinaria, a new genus of palms (Cryosophileae, Coryphoideae, Arecaceae) from the Colombia-Panama border". Phytotaxa.
 * This is a peer-reviewed scientific journal, so it should be a reliable source. It covers the topic in some depth, so it's helpful in establishing notability.
 * Example: Baker, William J.; Dransfield, John (2016). "Beyond Genera Palmarum: progress and prospects in palm systematics". Botanical Journal of the Linnean Society.
 * This is a peer-reviewed scientific journal, so it should be a reliable source for a specific fact. Since it only dedicates a few sentences to the topic, it can't be used to establish notability.

It is just simple works and examples from big event in Berkeley. In my opinion, you can add your own word about what happen in this event because this is the university with a tradition of strong protests against injustices in society. Where the voices of the real students are spoken. And you can add more image for this article. For example:

This is the image how the Berkeley do something for protesting my country (Vietnam)

Nice work!!!