User:NoraIzzy/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
Yvette Flunder

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
== I have chosen the article on Yvette Flunder because I am intrigued by her work as an HIV/AIDS activist and advocate for the LGBT/Q community. It matters to me because my father died from HIV as a result of drug use and I would like to learn more about HIV education and meaningful ways to give back in honor of my father. ==

Evaluate the article
I believe the lead section is not overly detailed and could be improved to include Yvette Flunder's work as an activist and advocate for HIV/AIDS and LGBT/Q community. The tone is neutral and does not persuade the reader to select a position. The sources and links are accurate and they work. I was not able to find any peer reviews however, based on listening to sermons, lectures and possibly information from her book, I believe more can be added to the content. The article is well written, free of grammatical errors and underdeveloped. It would be nice to see content regarding her early music and ministry influences, activist work abroad and any political involvement and stance on issues related to her life.