User:Normaneanna/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
San Diego Blood Sisters

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
It relates to our course and seems interesting.

Evaluate the article
Overall this seems to be a good article. It reads neutrally and seems to contain mostly relevant information around this topic. One critique might be to explore more sources, there seems to be only a few. Additionally, perhaps this article could use more hyperlinks to other wikipedia articles as it appears there is only one. As well, while this topic was largely adequately discussed, it may be lacking a section concerning their operations. It seems to jump from it's formation straight to how the public reacted but it might read more naturally and complete if a section were to be added in between discussing their operations in general.