User:Northsideknights/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
I am evaluating the Apple Watch article.

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
I have been an Apple Watch user for several years now, and the device has impacted my health in a positive manner. My first impression of the article is that it has been revised and updated on a frequent basis.

Evaluate the article
The lead includes an introductory sentence that correctly describes the article's topic, but it does not provide a brief description of the article's major sections. It is a little wordy, but the information is valuable to the rest of the article.

The content is both relevant to the topic and up-to-date. It is presented in a neutral manner with factual information. The article is fairly balanced, but there may be too much information regarding the development and release of the initial product. In terms of sourcing, there exists a variety of perspectives that are current with working hyperlinks. The writing structure is fairly concise and well-organized. Images are present for each section to enhance the understanding of the article. My overall impression is that this article is extremely polished, but the lead could be revamped a tad to outline the bulk of the topic.