User:NosQuaerere/sandbox

FANNIE BARRIER WILLIAMS - mainspace article

ADDITIONAL TO DO:

All edits completed by next Lunch N Learn

- birth/death citation in lead? - KL no, information incorporated and cited in the body of the article

- only black woman to gain membership to chicago women's club (or was she the first) ...fix in both lead and body JB fixed

- childhood and family ...."Fannie's family was part of a privileged class" JB fixed

- fix citations that cite the sandbox JB fixed

- KL/TF ran article through plagiarism app, flagged at 81.3% expected plagiarism, yikes! (Mostly material that was in the mainspace before we made our contributions)

https://tools.wmflabs.org/copyvios/?lang=en&project=wikipedia&title=Fannie+Barrier+Williams&oldid=&action=search&use_engine=1&use_links=1&turnitin=0&noskip=1

- KL/TF added wikilinks where appropriate

- KL/TF combined duplicate citations

JULIA K/ORSI

- give the entire article a read through, check for clarity, fluidity, and make relevant copyedits and revisions as needed

- make sure information is in chronological order. Please pay special attention to "social activism and charity work" section. That's the area where two sections were combined, and could definitely use another pair of eyes to ensure fluidity. When possible, put in chronological order. For shorter, single sentence, uncited claims, I think maybe group all of those at the end of the section?

- use of word aristocracy (in Social activism and charity work section - paragraph 1) ....change to direct quote (from Hendrick biography)