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CORALIE FRANKLIN COOK - mainspace article

ADDITIONAL TO DO:

All edits completed by next Lunch N Learn

GRIFFEN/MEL:

- fix terminology in lead (possession, slave)

- double check citations (fix redundancies and make sure they link to actual article and not sandbox)

- please read through the entire article and check for clarity, fluidity and make relevant copyedits and revisions as needed. You had a note on wording in the personal life section ( "is descendant not enough if it's a few generations away?" -Griffen) Maybe you can work on re-wording that a bit? I noticed that the word "descendant" pops up quite a bit so it reads as a little redundant.

- add any relevant wikilinks as you're reading through

- neutralize or directly quote offensive Elizabeth Cady Stanton statement can someone look at the Rosalyn Terborg-Penn book, page 69, and turn this into a direct quote? Or else reword in the mainspace so its not as offensive? I have this written in my notes, but can no longer view that page number on google books: "Terrell and Cook were among the few African American suffragists recognized by the NAWSA hierarchy because they were educated, professional, middle-class women, or the image of the 'intelligent' women Stanton had hoped to see enfranchised (69)"

KERI:

- info box will do together in class next week

- ran through plagiarism app, flagged at 40.5% expected plagiarism, yikes!

https://tools.wmflabs.org/copyvios/?lang=en&project=wikipedia&title=Coralie+Franklin+Cook&oldid=&action=search&use_engine=1&use_links=1&turnitin=0

- added Temperance section to talk page