User:Nosebagbear/GA

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Roman Tmetuchl
Roman Tmetuchl - GA Review

Clear/Concise

 * Business section could probably be trimmed

Spelling/Grammar
No issues identified

MOS - Lead

 * Relative depth - more detail on his business career might make sense
 * Pronunication - definitely needs a pronunciation addition

MOS - Layout

 * Order - is a needed? Self-write?

MOS - Words to watch

 * Some of his money and land - do we know how much was donated?
 * Survived by - see WP:SURVIVEDBY - there's a few bits here, but a personal life section as distinct from death is probably a better approach.

MOS - Fiction

 * N/A

MOS - Embedded Lists

 * Currently N/A

To be allocated

 * How did he testify for the soldiers?
 * Which other committee was the independence motion referred to?
 * Do we know why he didn't press charges for the assassination attempt?