User:Notjenna2001/Kanaka Creek Regional Park/Eelgeoffreylee Peer Review

General info
Kanaka Creek Regional Park
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Notjenna2001/Kanaka Creek Regional Park
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Kanaka Creek Regional Park

Evaluate the drafted changes
The lead includes a highly concise, detailed, neutral tone and information regarding the assigned regional park. It contains much more information than the present article. The original article only contained the lead, whereas the draft contains much more additional information. However, no additional pictures were used in the article.