User:Notkuly/Bisexual erasure/Mfajardo2 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Notkuly


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Notkuly/Bisexual_erasure?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

Suggestions for topics:


 * Female motivations - Why women would disregard or erase their bisexual identity (since there's a male section of this)
 * Impact of effect of bisexual erasure in
 * "Bisexual erasure is a form of stigma and leads to adverse mental health consequences for people who identify as bisexual" -- Provide more details on the mental health consequences
 * Talk about how one can reduce the stigma -- through media, laws, everyday life, etc