User:Notmmyrealname/User:Notmmyrealname/sandbox/Contehis Peer Review

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not my real name(caleb)
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The article does well at explaining the different forms of business. What impressed me was how fluid her writing is, she explains like 3-4 different aspects in business and she connected all her ideas together nicely it. The only thing I could suggest is to add another source or two in the paragraph, I think this would help because it could be more informative, you could have a link to a credible source that goes into depth about the concepts she explained. The most important change would be having more links. One thing I noticed she has a lot more information so, I need to add more sources onto mine and provide more information.

Article Lead
Yes, looking at the lead I feel satisfied. Yes, the lead reflects the important information. No, the lead is very balanced gives insight on everything, equally, no topic or piece is talked about more than others.

Structure
The sections are organized well and no I feel like the way they are currently presented works good. Each sentence has a good length, she talks about 4 different pieces and they each get the same length because they all have equal importance. There aren't any articles that are unnecessary or off topic. I feel like the article covers the information that's necessary. No the article doesn't draw any conclusions it's more like you take it how you read it.

Neutral Content
Reading the article, the perspective sounds like it's coming from someone that is majoring in business or in a business career informing others with their knowledge of their profession. No, the tone of the article is very neutral. No, the article does not make claims on behalf of other people. No, the article is neutral it's strictly sharing information.

Reliable Sources
The first paragraph is connected to a reliable source. There are 2 paragraphs with only 1 source for both. I can't find any unsourced statements.

Review Reflection
The 3 changes I will make to my own article will be punctuation, making sure I have enough sources within my paragraph, and making sure the tone of my article stays nuetral.