User:Notyourtherapist/Achulet massacre/Febreeze560 Peer Review

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Notyourtherapist


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The lead has clearly explained of a brief background of how the Achulet Massacre takes place and year it has started to get a sense of the writer wants to grab the audience attention. The writer has add a bit of the Achulet Massacre article therefore, I recommend the writer to contribute more information on the article and find more sources in other reliable data source search websites. The lead is concise but, not enough information to not get enough detail about the topic and there is relevant information on the Achulet Massacre article. Also the content is up to date with the article and while reading the article the content itself is neutral. There aren't any claims that is heavily bias and reading the article the viewpoints are just is representing well on the tone about the article. There is no persuasive position on the article and seeing the article reference there is a few sources to backup the article information. The sources are accurately reflecting on the article information and the sources is thorough about the article with its current date. There are a diverse of authors in the sources with links are working fine and the article is easy to understand and read. The article has no spelling errors and the major points are well organized but it need more major points to know more about the Achulet Massacre article. There isn't any images on the article so I recommend at least an image about the article to get a sense of what does it look like. The overall improvements of the article is need an image, more major points on the article, and find two more sources to add at least more information to get to know more about what is the Achulet Massacre.