User:Nounonymous/Christopher Schell/Jasminenwee Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Nounonymous


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Nounonymous/Christopher_Schell?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
Hi! Great job on the wiki page and I think you did a good job on explaining his education and career well in a neutral tone. I think one think that might be interesting to add is in the infobox, there is an option to add their thesis, the thesis url, and their doctoral advisor since I see you already have information on his dissertation. If you are able to, adding a photo of him and perhaps photos or external links to other images of his work would be exciting to see on this page as well. I also like how you included some of his personal life.

I noticed that your select publications is currently unfinished but I think when you do add them, bolding just his name and leaving the rest of the citation in normal font will make his name stand out to show that he wrote these publications. Overall great job!