User:Nounonymous/Christopher Schell/Sharkiemare Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Nounonymous


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Nounonymous/Christopher_Schell?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
I really like what you have so far, and don't have too many criticisms for it. Obviously, most of it is filling in the rest. I see that you have a select publications section to fill in. Have you found any honors/awards to boost notability? That might be helpful to ensure it doesn't get taken down.

It might also be helpful to have a devoted "research" section so you can elaborate on that a little more. Another possibility is making a separate section describing his activism, and separating that from "career" so that it can be more research focused. I feel like the activism is significant enough that it might deserve its own section.

You have a lot of Wiki links, and I totally understand not wanting to add too many, but some key ones to include might be for things like racism and coyotes.

I think that the lead is really excellent. It is concise yet includes the relevant details.

You did a really good job keeping a neutral tone. I did not see any examples of opinion in there.

The sources seem relevant, and how you portray them in the article is accurate, from what I can see. I think including more sources in the select publications (and a research section if you decide to go that route) should be more than adequate.

Great work! Just continue filling in the other sections using the same format and I think it will be awesome!