User:Nour AlMannaei/sandbox

Notes:
this is my notes

Article Evaluation
-the article has too many words that reference to other articles on Wikipedia

-it looks like it has all the information that should be included in the chosen American film with the help of the editors; such as adding and removing names from the characters and fixing the plot.

Citation
Kristin Thompson, David BordwellFilm. "History: An Introduction, 3rd Edition."

Choice of Topic: Arab Cinema
We think thisneeds a lot of improvements especially in the 'overview' section where it lacks reliable information on how the Arab cinema has formed and developed to reach its present day success. In fact, the article mentions that "Three quarters of all Arab movies are produced in Egypt." and provides no citation to the statement. However, we do disagree with the statement and we believe the Arab cinema has changed during the last decades in which there has been many Arab films dominating the Arab cinema apart from the Egyptians films and we would like to elaborate on this statement. The article also mentions the Arab festivals and talks about Qatar's cinema festival in a brief manner and we would like to elaborate on this fact since Qatar's Film Festival has progressed compared to the last few years. We would like to also talk about the role of the Arab cinema in the modern world and to investigate more on whether the Arab cinema has influenced and expanded to the West part of the world.

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Arab_cinema