User:Novaber24/Primnoa pacifica/Ekaras05 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

(provide username) Novaber24 and Meharris23


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Novaber24/Primnoa pacifica


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Primnoa pacifica

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

Lead

The lead is good! It is short and concise and easy to understand. It provides enough information.

Content

I would recommend explaining the significance of the spinose basal scales and the narrower medial scales and large marginal scales if they do anything other than effect shape.

I would add more photos as well.

If you can find any information on temperature range for habitat and distribution I would include that.

I would also add a new section for taxonomy.

Maybe some information regarding their conservation status.

If possible add some more information to the relationship with humans section. I found that particularly interesting.

All content that you have is relevant and up to date. There is no content that doesn't belong either.

Tone and Balance

All of the content appears to be neutral. nothing is biased or overrepresented.

Images and Media

I would include some more images in the article as I believe you only have one at the moment.

Sources

Good amount of current sources. All content is backed up by good reliable sources.

Organization

Article is easy to read and easy to understand.

Content is well organized. Good order of sections.

No major grammatical or spelling errors.

 Overall Impressions

its a good article! Just needs a little more information and some photos. All of the content that has been added is very good! If you could provide a little more detail in a few spots as well as a little additional information I think it will be perfect. I edited some grammar and wording here in your draft