User:Novafields/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
I am evaluating the article on Alternating electric field therapy.

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
I chose this topic because my mother is currently researching tumor treating fields for her dissertation and I am interested in learning more about it. Alternating electric field therapy uses small electric fields to disrupt cancer growth. Because it has minimal side effects, it is a promising addition to radiation therapy and chemotherapy. However, more research needs to be done and more information needs to be spread about it so that its use can grow.

Evaluate the article
The lead section of this article is concise and clear. It could be improved by having a more information that outlines the rest of the article. The article has written fairly well, but the Mechanism section can be rewritten to be more concise. An image describing the mechanism would be helpful as well. An image of how TTFields are administered would also be very useful. The article could be improved by a greater focus on what alternating electric field therapy is and its mechanism. Currently, much of the article is focused on clinical trials and regulations surrounding TTFields as used by the company Novocure. There can be more information and sources included for the side affects of TTFields as well as current research on its applications.