User:Noveljams/Conflict management/RB88986P Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

@Noveljams


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Editing User:Noveljams/Conflict management - Wikipedia


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Conflict management - Wikipedia

Evaluate the drafted changes
The contribution added to the article is relevant to the topic and provides information that is useful in explaining the concept of conflict management thoroughly. In terms of organization I would like to mention that some of the sentences are wordy and can appear confusing. I found myself re-reading them to understand the information being explained. I think it would help to break the sentences down into shorter ones.

Also, another thing to note is your references. I did not see a reference for the information that is intended to be added to the body of the article. However, I did see them listed in your bibliography. This may be a simple oversite but it should added when publishing your edits. This will avoid any plagiarism flags. Overall, I enjoyed reading your addition to the article. I believe it offers necessary information to the article. With the minor suggestions mentioned, i believe it will be a great addition to the conflict management article.