User:Nreeb/2024 South African general election/Hyaak Peer Review

General info
Nreeb
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:Special:Contributions/Nreeb
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):2024 South African general election

Evaluate the drafted changes
So far Nash has added to the public perception of the energy crisis. I believe that this context is important as he is working on research covering general election, which is highly dependent on the extent of what the public understands and prioritizes. The specific details on the prevalence of blackouts ties to what he has proposed in his bibliography. One thing I would suggest looking into further into different counties in Africa. That way there can a cross application of successful policies that worked in similar situations and see if politicians in ANC are willing to adopt them. If this feels not relevant/there is not enough sources for this I would still want to see proposed policies under the energy crisis rather than a message that the issue is going to be hard to handle in the election (Have the candidates run with a specific position?) I feel as though this can give a fuller picture about the state of politics in South Africa.

For general feedback the tone of the contributions seem to be neutral (maybe take out terms like general to make it more official) and the viewpoints are consistently backed with data from reputable sources. The bibliography that Nash has uploaded also shows that he has done extensive looks for sources that cover multiple viewpoints and are trustworthy.