User:Nsg1029/Palaemon paludosus/Babs subs Peer Review

General info
nsg1029
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:Nsg1029/Palaemon paludosus
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Palaemon paludosus

Evaluate the drafted changes
It is a very clear and concise addition that does supplement the article with good information not yet explained yet. I would work on some capitalization as well as figuring out how to add the sources in text with maybe one more article for support. I feel that this addition could be a little longer with maybe another sentence explaining the seasons a little better, however with little known information posted on the article it makes logical sense that reproduction should not be the main paragraph and that a side note would be appropriate at this instance. Overall, this addition is well written although a little short for me and without bias language just with some small errors like capitalization and citation.