User:Nsg1029/Palaemon paludosus/Ldw15 Peer Review

General info
Nsg1029
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:Nsg1029/Palaemon paludosus
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Palaemon paludosus

Evaluate the drafted changes
Lead:

In your case, the lead was kept the same as the initial article. The lead is very concise and does not really give brief descriptions of the article's major sections, either existing or added, so this may be something to add.

Content:

The content added is relevant to the topic. The dates within your source are a bit outdated, so it may be good to double-check that this information is still accurate. There does not seem to be content missing or content that does not belong.

Tone and Balance:

The content added is neutral as you state only facts. There does not seem to be any bias.

Sources and References:

The new content is supported by the source provided, but citations should be added for the final draft. The source is thorough and reflects the cited peer-reviewed journal articles, although those articles aren't the most current. The link for the source does work.

Organization:

The content added is well-written, concise, and easy to understand. There are no spelling errors, but the first letter of sentences two and three should be capitalized. The heading of this section sums up the content well.

Images and Media:

No images were added, but there doesn't appear to be a need for this either.

Overall Impressions:

The content you added definitely improved the article, it is now more complete as it goes into more detail about the sexual reproduction that was mentioned previously in the existing article. The content could be improved by updating the lead to briefly mention information included in subsections, adding citations when appropriate, and maybe by going into a little more detail about their reproductive times. For example, the breeding season varies by temperature, but you could potentially elaborate using the information in the source to include which areas have seasonal breeding versus which areas have breeding year-round.