User:Nsr009/Pulmonary fibrosis/Jjt010 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing? Nsr009

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 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Nsr009/Pulmonary fibrosis
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Pulmonary fibrosis

Evaluate the drafted changes
The editor did a good job adding relevant and informative content to the original article. But the content that was added did not seem to flow well and it made the passage to be a little choppy and hard to follow at times. However the content was given in a manner that was from a neutral perspective and was not perceived to be persuasive in any manner. The content also gave a more detailed understanding of the affects pulmonary fibrosis has on a molecular level.