User:Ntam97/Radical SAM/Juliamontgomery Peer Review

Overall, the wiki article has a ton of good information about the radical SAM family of enzymes.

I appreciated the History section, which gives the reader a good grasp of how expansive this family is.

The largest thing I see is that some language seems out of place for a Wikipedia article, such as the following:

"Representative/Prototype enzymes will only be mentioned for each reaction scheme. The audience is highly encouraged to research more into current studies on radical SAM enzymes. Many of which are responsible for fascinating yet important reactions."

This language reads more like a review article rather than an encyclopedia entry. There shouldn't be a mention of how the reactions are fascinating yet important, nor should the audience be encouraged. This is excess information that, while potentially true, reads more as persuasive language. Use a tone that is more neutral to the subject manor.

In addition, the list of review articles felt a little out of place, especially as they will go out of date in due time. However, I could see it being helpful, and the radical SAM page is a page that is more likely to be updated.

I really liked the section "Carbon methylation in nucleic acid modifications and secondary metabolites/cofactor/antibiotics biosynthesis", as it was organized well and gave a lot of good information. However, I feel like you might want to work on the section title. It is long and has a lot of words that non-science individuals could get caught up on. Even if you shortened it to something like "Modifications & Secondary Cofactors for Biosynthesis" or something in that realm.

Your "Clinical Considerations" section is very well done, as it shows the reader an overview of the important clinical implications of the radical SAM family in a streamlined way.

This is a suggestion I made for my own page and would make for anyone's page: I would consider running it through a grammar checker such as Grammarly (which is free) or Word's grammar checker. I noticed some articles missing, or inconsistencies with whether the oxford comma is used.

I enjoyed learning more about the radical SAM family of enzymes, and commend you for doing one of the harder pages!