User:Ntmy777/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
Fluoride toxicity

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
Fluoride treament is common in oral health to prevent tooth decay. It would be interesting to look into the consequences of large consumption of fluoride.

Evaluate the article
The introductory sentence is concise, however it is just an expansion of the terminology. The lead is a good overview of the article, but it is overly detailed as the specific lethal dosages are quantified. It is recommended to move the defined over consumption doses to the following section.

The article is well divided into subtopics such as worldwide occurrences and effects on the body. All contents are related to the topic of the article. Very few images are used, addition of images would make the contents more intriguing to the readers. The article is written from an unbiased perspective, the tone is not persuasive.

As mentioned in the talk page, there are several factual errors that could be further examined and corrected. In addition, the correlation between high levels of fluoride exposure and neurodevelopment is vaguely summarized from the source.