User:Ntww/sandbox

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This is place to practice clicking the "edit" button and practice adding references (via the citation button). Please see Help:My_sandbox or contact User_talk:JenOttawa with any questions.

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 * Note: Please use your sandbox to submit assignment # 3 by pasting it below. When uploading your improvements to the article talk page please share your exact proposed edit (not the full assignment 3).


 * Talk Page Template: CARL Medical Editing Initiative/Fall 2019/Talk Page Template

Assignment # 3
Feedback to individual learners

Random-assortment-simple sentences; clear purpose. You mentioned no red flags for the source which is a clinical practice guideline (as per lecture). it would have been even better if you listed some of the red flags.

JasmineLam845- thoughtful changes; language was easy to read and comprehend. I liked how you tabled the original Vs proposed changes which made it easy to compare. your critique of the source was excellent!

CMoonQueens- the sentence that will lead into the section that you plan to add is very helpful as it summarizes the evidence-that it is limited and equivocal. The choice of source to justify the sentence is well thought out. I look forward to the community response!