User:Nuc13arPanda/Adam Pierce/MLIK Peer Review

This is an interesting article that I liked, I thought at the beginning "Adam Pierce" was the wrestlers, it will be a good idea to clarify that they are not the same person. There is not a wiki page for the percussionist, which will make it difficult to distinguish between the two. Also, if you could add a link to "percussionist " to make it more understandable especially for people who do not know much about musical terms. The hardest part imo is to come up with relaiable sources. You have 3 sources, but I think two of them are not acceptable. I do not think Facebook page is considered as a relaiable source, and blog is a matter of debate. If you could add more sources to the article to give more credability, it will be helpful.

One thing that was confusing for me is the name, I checked the source and it says that "Mice Parade is known as Adam Pierce", and you mentioned that it is a band, so I'm not sure which one is it. Also, I think you could add a "History" section to explain how/when the band was created.

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Nuc13arPanda


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 * Mice Parade


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 * Mice Parade

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