User:Nulifeforme/Irish mythology/SpaceshipCat Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Nulifeforme


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Nulifeforme/Irish_mythology?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Irish mythology

Evaluate the drafted changes
The first thing I noticed is that all the sources are very reliable, all very scholarly and verifiable. Unfortunately they only use one in their sandbox at least that I can see. The information presented from that one source is great though, the writer seems to be very knowledgeable on the topic offering a bunch of great information, the article seems neutral and unbiased, and the writer is on the right track. I would like if you could expand at the end with the among others. It would be great if you can elaborate on which other ones you are referring to. The only thing I can say is that this person definitely needs to make use of their other sources. This has a lot of great potential, they only need to add a bit more from the other sources listed in the bibliography. All in all, the writing providing is concise and backed by a scholarly source, the writer looks like they know their stuff. A great addition all around, I can only hope for a bit extra!